I'm sorry so here's a sampling!

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I'm sorry for my little absent.  I've been busy with school and college stuff.  haha  It's aways fun.  Anyway, I have been working of some stuff.  I'm going to try to get some stuff up here within the next two weeks but you never know what is going to happen.  I have senior projects starting up and since I have less than two months left of school and such...  it's pretty crazy.  

I'm also in a jam for money since I will be starting college this fall.  So, any donations to the Steph-needs-money fund would be wonderful.  :-P Anyway yeah, that's one reason why I haven't updated my subscription.  I really want to update it but oh well.  

Also, I'm going to give you all a little sampling of what I have been working on.  These are the first couple paragraphs of the little project.  -->

The car stopped with jerk.  The two men in the front turned around with large smirks on their faces and spoke to the man in the back seat.  The driver decided to speak first.  The other man pulled out a cigarette.  The third man in the back let out a sigh; he wasn't sitting up straight and wasn't fully paying attention to his surroundings.

"So, Mr. American Hero," he drawled as he chuckled.  His words were tough to understand because of his thick Romanian accent. The other man placed the cigarette in his mouth and then lit it.  "Here you go," he continued.  He point to path ahead of the car.  The man in the back sat up and looked at the two men in the front.  The trio didn't start off on the right foot.  He surveyed around to find a bleak place.  There was no life or much alive vegetation.  The colors that were around were browns and gray.  There was a fog coming in but it wasn't too thick.  There was a house in the distance and the paths continued pass it.  The fait sounds of a market place were heard.

"This is it?" He commented.  The driver rolled his eyes and then something to the passenger in Romanian.  The passenger laughed as he focused on the third man.  "You two are just dropping me off here?"

"Yes Mr. American Hero.  We would like to see your skills," he retorted.  The other man said something in Romanian and then the driver smirked.  "If you just tell why you're here, then we might be able to work something out."  The man in the backseat shook his head and rolled his eyes.  The passenger blew a puff a smoke into his face.

The American's green eyes flashed with brief anger but the he let another sigh.  "You know why I'm here."  The man was clearly not from around here.  It was a puzzle to see if this was a true Romanian welcome or they were just screwing with him.  His light brown fell into his yes and it caused him to him to move his hand to move his fallen hair.  This caused part of his jacket to rise up.  It revealed that he was "well prepared".  The two men in the front stared at him for another few moments before the American spoke again.  "Didn't you two read the packet?  This is top secret."  


So, what did you all think about it?  Any guesses?  lol  Just comment and tell me.  Or better yet, get on my ass and email me seven times a day to get me to post it.  lol

Anyway, that's pretty much it.  :)  Comment and leave me some love, okay?

-Steph
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Omega-Lino's avatar
I agree with Daseinhorn, although the wording is excellent, I don't think I could tell what the story was about from that sample. Right now, I'm picturing something involving the black-market.